65/21:
The text should say: "The first argument is the handle of the file in use,
..."
73/8:
I would move here the subarray example out of the I/O chapter (pages
268-269).
In addition, I would move the remaining example on pages 266-267 to the end
of section 9.4.5 (Split Collective Data Access Routines) on page 246.
As a result, Section 9.9 disppears.
259/29:
poor Latex formatting. I am pretty sure better formatting can be achieved.
266/8-9:
extra blank line. Could be a side effect from the marginpar which will
disappear
in the final version of the document.
Jean-Pierre